职高高考英语作文应试技巧
职高高考英语作文应试技巧房县职业技术学校李军
【摘要】以前英语作文评分依据是根据要点和语言准确度而定，但近几年要求“使用较多语法结构和词汇”，因此要想得高分，除了要点和语言准确度以外，还必须在较复杂的句子结构或较高级的词汇上有所表现。句式单一，缺乏生气的文章，哪怕无任何错误也不可能得高分，相反“有些错误，但是为了使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致”，给分档次仍在最高档(21～25分)。
【关键词】复杂句子高级词汇卷面
每次给学生评讲作文，笔者总把学生的作文比作前去求职的“面试者”，而改卷老师就是那前去招聘的“考官”，“考官”面对成千上万面试者，不一会就因枯燥而疲惫不堪，如何让你这个面试者给考官留下好的印象而打高分呢？那只有你这个面试者必须要有出众之处，让“考官”眼前一亮，自然你的分数就会让你也眼前一亮。如何让你这个面试者有出众之处呢？
职高的学生，整体的作文都不好，如果你的作文错误较少，就会显得非常好了，如果你再能用几个复杂的句子，高级的词汇，那你就会很出众了。笔者把它具体归纳如下：一、一篇好作文总体要求：1、一个漂亮引人的开头。例如：
【原文】I’magirl,I’m18yearsold,Ilikedancingandsinging,IwillgraduatefromFangxianVocationaltechnicalschoolthissummer.
【修正】I,an18-year-oldgirl,whoamfondofdancingandsingwillgraduatefromFangxianVocationaltechnicalschoolthissummer.2、2-3个复杂句子，3-4个高级词汇的正文。3、一个正确无误的结尾。4、一个整洁美观的卷面。
二、复杂句子书写的常见方法，也是得高分的“亮点”。1、灵活运用多种句式。
①运用主从复合句：定语从句、宾语从句、主语从句、同位语从句。〔原文〕IdolikejoiningintheEnglishCorner.Itwasbuiltthreeyearsago.〔修正〕IdolikejoiningintheEnglishCornerwhichwasbuiltthreeyearsago.
②运用倒装句。如:
〔原文〕InotonlylearnEnglishinclassbutalsolearnitinmypart-time.〔修正〕NotonlydoIlearnEnglishinclassbutalsoinmypart-time.③运用强调句
〔原文〕Wefeltveryveryhappywhenweweretogether.【修正〕Wedidfeelveryhappywhenweweretogether④运用分词短语作状语。如:
〔原文〕WeoftenpractisespeakingEnglish,changeourideas,talkaboutourfavouriatesportsandsoon.
〔修正〕WeoftenpractisespeakingEnglish,changingourideas,talkingaboutourfavouriatesportsandsoon⑤适当使用被动语态
〔原文〕OurschoolheldanEnglishCornerthreeyearsago.
〔修正〕AnEnglishCornerwasbeingheldinourschoolthreeyearsago.⑥运用由with或without引导的短语。2.通过分句和合句，增强句子的连贯性和表现力.
原文〕Wecanlearnspoken-English.Andwecantalkaboutinterestingthings.WealsotalkaboutlearningEnglishexperienceandso
[修]Wecanlearnspoken-English,talkingaboutinterestingthings,English-learningexperienceandsoon.3.学会使用过渡词。如:
①递进:then然后，besides还有，moreover此外，furthermore而且等。②转折:however然而，but但是，onthecountry相反，afterall毕竟等。③总结:finally最后，atlast最后，inconclusion最后，inbrief总之等。④强调:indeed确实，certainly一定，surely确定，aboveall尤其三、如何使用”高级词汇”:1.使用词组、习语代替单词。如:[原文]IlikeEnglishCornerverymuch.
[修正]Iamkeenon/fondofEnglishCornerverymuch.2.使用一些很有“洋味”的单词。如:
原文〕Anumberofstudentsalljoinintheactivitiesactively修正〕Manyastudenttakesanactivepartintheactivities.3.避免重复使用某一单词或短语。如:
〔原文〕Wepracticespoken-English,talkaboutsomethinginteresting,weoftentalkaboutourexperience,too.
修正〕Wepracticespoken-English,talkingaboutsomethinginteresting,sharingourexperience,too.四、例文修改
介绍你们学校的情况：这是一所中等职业学校，有40多年的历史，许多毕业生都已成名。全校有39个班，1600多学生，教职员工（faculty）近200人。校园很大而且美丽，四周绿树环绕。有一座图书大楼，两座教学楼，一个大操场。老师对学生要求很严格，学生很尊敬老师。
Ourschool
（原文）Ourschoolisamediumvocationalschool.Ithasmorethanfortyyears’history.Manygraduatescomefromourschool,theyareveryfamousnow.
（修改）Ourschoolisasecondryvocationalschoolwithamorethan40-yearhistory.Manygraduateswhocomefromourschoolareveryfamousatpresent.（原文）Thereare39classesinourschool.Thenumberofthestudentsis1600.Andtherearetwohundredteachersandworkersinourschool
（修改）Thereare39classesinourschool.thenumberofthestudentsis1600,andnearly200facultiesareworkinghardinourschool.
（原文）Ourschoolisverybigandbeautiful.Therearemanytreesaroundourschool.Ourschoolhasaverybiglibrary.weoftenreadbooksinit.Twoteachingbuildingsandabigplaygroundareinourschool.
（修改）Ourcampusisfairlybigandbeautiful,aroundwhicharemanytrees,inwhicharealargeplayground,ahugelibrarywhereweoftenreadbooksandtwoteachingbuildings.
（原文）Theteachersinourschoolareverykind.Thestudentsareaskedverystrictlybytheirteachers.butthestudentsadmiretheirteachersveryvery
much.(110字）
（修改）Theteachersinourschoolareverykind,butthestudentsarerequiredverystrictlybyourteachers,andthestudentsdohonortheirteachersverymuch.(共107字）总结小语
我们不能为了长句子而刻意书写与全文衔接不紧的长句子，而应是在书写完全文后，修改2-3个与全文连接顺畅的长句子，替换3-4个高级词汇。牢记基本要求！！！
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一、Greatchangesinmyhometown
Morethantwentyyearsago,myhometownwasjustasmall,oldandpoortown.Mostofpeoplewerefarmers.Therewerefewfactories.Thepeopledidn’thaveenoughfoodtoeatandworeoldclothes.Theyhadahardlife.
Greatchangeshavetakenplaceinthepasttwentyyears.Thepeoplehavefoundalotofwaysofmakingmoney.Nowtherearemanytallbuildings.Theyareverybeautiful.Roadsarewideandclean.Peoplecantakebusesordrivetheirowncarstogotowork.Manypeoplehavecellphonesandpersonalcomputers.People’slivingconditionshaveimprovedalot.Thankstothegovernment’sefforts.myhometownisbecomingmoreandmorebeautiful.
二、Savetheearth
Howtoprotecttheenvironmenthasbecomeoneofthebiggestproblemsintheworld.
It’sourdutytoprotectourenvironment.Nomatterwherewelive,weshoulddosomethingtokeepourneighborhoodcleanandtidy.Wecancollectwastepaperorotherwastethingsforrecycling.Weshouldplantmoretreesandweshouldpreventthosefactoriesfrompouringwastewaterintorivers,lakesandfields.Weshouldn’tleaverubbisheverywhereandspitinpublicplaces.Wemustn’tpicktheflowersorsteponthegrassinpublic.Ifeveryonetrieshisbesttoprotecttheenvironment,theworldwillbecomemuchmorebeautifulandourlifewillbebetterandbetter.
三、Improveourenvironment
Goodenvironmentcanmakepeoplefeelhappy.Toimprovetheenvironmentmeanstoqualifyourlife.Whatshouldwedotoimproveourenvironment?
Weshouldplantmoretrees.Andweshouldpreventthosefactoriesfrompouringwastewaterintorivers,lakesandfields.Wheneverweseelitterontheground,weshouldpickitupandthrowitintoadustbin.Don’tspitinpublicplaces.Don’tdrawonpublicwalls.It’sourdutytokeepourearthcleanandtidy.
四、Pollutionaroundus
Inrecentyearsourlifeisbecomingbetterandbetter.Butourenvironmentisbecomingworseandworse.It’sverybadforourlife.Nowmanypeoplehaveair-conditionersandcars,theyproduce(giveoff)wastegas.Moreandmoretreesare
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beingcutdown.Therearesomuchsandontheearth(leavingonlysand).Weoftenseefactoriespourwasteintoriversorlakes.Waterintheriverisquitedirty.Wehaven’tenoughcleanwatertodrinkincities.Nowweareindanger.It’sverynecessaryandimportanttoprotecttheenvironmentwell.Ithinkifeveryonetrieshisbesttoprotecttheenvironment,theworldwillbecomemuchmorebeautiful,andourlifewillbebetterandbetter.
五、Makeourworldmorebeautiful!
Protectingtheenvironmentisbecomingmoreandmoreimportanttohumans.It’sourdutytotakecareofthenaturearoundus.Animalsandplantsareourbestfriends.,andweshouldsharetheworldwiththem.Weshouldn’tkillwildanimals,andwemustprotectforestsbecausetheyareanimals’home.Wemustplantmoretreesandgrass,theycanmaketheworldgreener.Themorebeautifultheworldis,thehappierliveswewillhave.Let’sdoourbesttomaketheworldbeautiful.
六、Keepourschoolclean
Wearestudyinginthisschool.Itisourdutytokeepitcleanandtidy.Itisnotgoodtospitinpublicplaces,suchasinthelibrary,intheclass.Weshouldn’tleaverubbishhereandthere.Don’tdrawpicturesonthewall,theyinfluencethelookofourschool.Weshouldkeeptheclassroomcleanandtidy.Andweshoulddosomecleaningoften.Ifeveryonetrieshisbesttodosomethingusefulforourschool,I’msureourschoolwillbemorebeautiful.
七、Mycountrylife
Iliketoliveinthecountryside.Iliveinasmallvillage.Thereisarivernearit.Lotsoftreesarearoundmyhouse.Icanseealotoffarmsandbirds.Thereislessnoise.Theairhereiscleanerandfresher.Therearefewercars.Ireadaloudearlyinthemorning.Whenitisgettingdark,themoonisbrightinthesky.It’sveryquiet.WhataniceplaceIlivein!
八、HowtolearnEnglishwell
Asweknow,Englishhasbecomeaninternationallanguage.ItismorepopularthananyotherlanguageinChina.Englishiswidelyspokenintheworldanditisthemostusefullanguagearoundtheworld.Buthowtolearnitwell?
Thebestwayistouseitallthetime.IfwecantalkinEnglish,thinkinEnglishwecanlearnitwell.Atschool,weshouldlearntohear,speak,readandwritecarefully.WeshouldspendenoughtimeinpracticingEnglish.IfwekeeponworkinghardatEnglish,wewillbeabletobegoodatitoneday.
九、HowIlearnEnglish
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Hello,everyone.ItismyhonortotalkwithallofyouabouthowtolearnEnglishwell.IlikeEnglishverymuch.Ialwayspreviewandmasterthemainideaofthelessonbeforeclass.Inclass,Ilistencarefully,speakloudlyandwritecarefullyandtakenotesifnecessary.Afterclass,Idomyhomeworkcarefully.IwatchEnglishmoviesandlistentoEnglishsongs.IhavebookedanEnglishnewspaper.It’sTimesEnglishPost,Icanlearnalotfromit.IamnotafraidofrememberingthenewwordsbecauseImastermanygoodmethods.IhopeyouworkhardatEnglishandmakeprogresseveryday.That’sall.
十、HowIimprovedmyEnglish
WhenIbegantolearnEnglish,Iwaspooratit.Iwasquiteworriedatthattime.LaterI1istenedtotheteacherattentivelyinclass,andmadenotescarefully.IfIhadanyquestion,IaskedmyEnglishteacherormyclassmatesforhelp.EverymorningIreadtheEnglishtextsaloudandlistenedtotheEnglishtapes.Intheevening,afterfinishingmyhomework,IalwaysreadsomeEnglishandmagazines.
NowIamoneofthebeststudentsatEnglishinmyclass.
十一、TheimportanceofEnglish
Englishisthemostwidelyspokenintheworld.It’sspokenbymostpeopleintheUSA,GreatBritain,Canada,Australia,andNewZealand.It"salsoverywidelyusedasaforeignlanguageinmanyothercountriesoftheworld.It"swidelyusedforbusinessbetweendifferentcountries.MorethanthreequartersoftheinformationontheInternetisinEnglish,too.Itisreallyabridgetosomuchknowledge.Englishisusedbytravellersandbusinesspeoplearoundtheworld.It"soneoftheworld"smostimportantlanguagesasitissowidelyused.That"swhymoreandmorepeopleinChinaareinterestedinlearningEnglish.
Englishissousefulthatwemustlearnitwell.Nowlet’sworkhardatitandseewholearnsitfasterandbetterinourclass.
十二、Iwanttobeaninventor
TVs,telephone,fridges,cars,planes,computersandmanyotherthingsareimportantinventions.Theyhavegreatlychangedourlife.Manypeoplehavetheirideasandwishes.Theywanttoinventsomenewthingsfortheworld.Iamoneofthem.Iwanttobeaninventorinthefuture,Inventionscanbringfunandhappinesstoourlifeandmakeourdailylifemoreconvenient.Ourlifewillbecomebetterandbetter.NowIamahighschoolstudent.Iwilltrymybesttoworkhardatmylessonstomakemydreamcometrue.
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十三、Iwanttobeatourguide
IwanttobeatourguidebecauseBeijingwillhostthe201*OlympicGames.TherewillbemanypeopletocometoChinafromallovertheworld.Mostofthemdon’tknowChinese.TheywanttovisitmanyinterestingplacesinChina.Icanbeoneoftheguides.Icanmakemuchmoney,too.HowhappyIwillbe!Sofromnowon,Imuststudyhard.IamgoingtolearnEnglisheveryday.Iwilltrymybesttomakeitcometrue.
十四、IliketheInternet
TheInternetisplayinganimportantpartinourdailylife.It’sveryuseful.IoftensearchtheInternetforsomeinformation.Icanreadthelatestnews,dosomeshopping,andgetallkindsofinformationfromit.IcanalsodownloadtheinformationthatIneedandIcansende-mailsandmaketelephonecallstomyfriendsontheinternet.ThemostimportantthingisthatIamabletostudyallmylessonsontheInternet.
TheInternetmakesmylifemoreinterestingandcolorfulandithasawideeffectonmystudyanddailylife.Iliketheinternetverymuch.Howaboutyou/Willyouhaveatry?
十五、TheInternet
TheInternetisbecomingmoreandmoreimportanttous.Withoutit,wecan’tdoworkbetter.Wecangoshoppingwithoutgoingoutofourhouses.AndwecanlistentomusicorwatchmoviesontheInternet.Itcanalsohelpalotwithourstudy.Wecanlearnmuchknowledgeondifferentsubjects,andgetinformationassoonaspossible.Butnow,someofuswork,studyorplayontheInternetforlongtime,especiallyforyoungpeopletoplaycomputergames.It’sbadforoureyesandhealth.IfwemakegooduseoftheInternet,itwillbeourbestfriendsandhelpusalot.
十六、Computer
Computerisawonderfulmachine.It"sagreatinventioninmanyyears.Itdevelopsveryquickly.Thesmallestcomputerisasbigasanote-book.Wecallitpocketcomputer.Computerbecomesmoreandmoreimportantinmanyways.Ithastouchedthelivesofeveryone,evenpeopleinfarawayvillages.Ithelpsustodowithallkindsofinformationandwegetknowledgefromit.Itcangiveusalotfun.
十七、Theimportanceofwater
Ofallthethingsweeatanddrink,wateristhemostimportant.Wecanlivewithoutfoodformanydays,buttwoorthreedayswithoutwater,usuallymakespeopledie.
However,notallofpeopleunderstandthis.Theykeepthrowingrubbishintotheriversorlakes.Somefactoriesevenpourwastewaterintotheriver.Asaresult,manyriversandlakeshavebecome
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sodirtythatthewaterisnolongersafeforpeopletodrink.
Let’sdoourbesttokeepthewatercleantosaveourselves.
十八、Water
Waterisveryimportantforourlife.Everydayweusewatertodrink,toocookandtowash.Waterisnecessaryforallplants.Theyneedwatertogrow.Peoplecan’tlivewithoutwater.Plantswilldiewithoutwater.Itisimportanttoalllivingthings.However,manypeoplepollutelakesandriverswithwastewater,sowemuststopsomepeopleorsomefactoriesfromwastingwaterorpollutingwaterandhelpkeepthewaterclean.Atthesametimeweshouldsaveasmuchwateraspossible.
十九、Ilikesports
Ifeelthattakingexerciseisgoodforourhealth.IoftenfelttiredwhenIwasstudyingbefore.FromthistermIkeeponrunningwhenIgetupinthemorning.AfterclassIoftengotoplaybasketballwithmyfriends.NowIfeelmuchbetterthanbeforeandIneverfeeltiredwhenIamstudyingAndIimprovealotinmylessons.Sopleasetakeexerciseasoftenaspossible.
二十、Introduceyourself
MynameisLiLei.IwasborninFuzhouonDecember15,201*.I’mstudyingatYucaiMiddleSchool.IlearnChinese,math,English,physics,chemistry,politics,andsoon.IlikeEnglishbest.Myfavoritesportisfootball.Myhobbiesaredrawingandcomputer.I’mveryhappytoliveinahappyfamily.Thereare3peopleinmyfamily.Myfatherisadoctor.Mymotherisateacher.Weloveeachotherverymuch.
二十一、Mybestfriend
Mybestfriendis---Heis15yearsold.Wearebothinthesameclass.Heworksveryhard.Heisneverlateforschoolandhedoeswellinallhislessons.Heisalwaysreadytohelpothers.Mymathisverypoor,soheoftenhelpsmewithmymathafterclass.Hisparentsarebothteachers.Theyareverybusy,soheoftenhelpsdothehouseworkathome.Heisalittleshorterthanmebutheisverystrong.Helikesplayingfootballverymuchatschool.Weoftenplayfootballtogetherandheplaysitprettywell.Hegetsonwellwithus.Everyoneinourclasslikeshim.
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