对比型作文结尾段
一比较型作文
（一）比较型作文一般分为说明式比较和议论式比较两种。
说明式比较在比较过程中，作者不发表个人意见，在文中不体现个人取向，单纯以说明介绍为目的。议论式比较以比较事物优劣，阐明自己立场为目的，一般分为倾向型和中立型两种类型。
（二）比较论说文一般有两种模式：
1．首段：明确摆出自己的立场。主体部分：通过运用比较，对比等手段，进一步说明自己取向或偏好的原因及正确性。结尾段：重申立场。
2．首段：只引出现象，对个人观点予以保留。体部分：进行对比。结尾段：自然而然地得出论点
作文题目
1.MakingFriendswithPeopleofsimilarordifferentpersonalities?2.AdvertisementorQualityofProducts?3.LivingAloneorLivingwithRoommates?4.CompareUrbanAreaswithRuralAreas5.ReadingSelectivelyorExtensively?6.CompetitionorCooperation?
7.BookKnowledgeorPracticalExperience?8.CommunicatingbyTelephoneorbyLetter?首段
I.首段=引言句+主题句
引言句：引出比较的对象，主题句：提出主题，明确表明作者的个人取向或偏好。引言句一般为与作文题紧密相关的社会背景，现实状况或是时下人们对某一事件或事物的普遍取向或偏好。主题句则开宗明义，明确提出作者的立场，观点，取向或偏好。
II.首段常用句型
1.Itiswidelyaccepted/anundeniablefactthat----Itgoeswithoutsayingthat-----Thereisnodobtthat------Itistruethat----
-----aregettingtheirwaysintoourdailylife.
E.g.Itiswidelyaccepted/anundeniablefactthatmoderntechnologyhasbenefitedhumanbeings.
2.Nowadays,therearesome/differentwaystodo---,suchasAandB.Butwhenitcomesto---
E.g.Nowadays,therearetwowaystoentertainourselves,suchaswatchingTVathomeandgoingtomovieswhenwearefree.
3.Withtherapiddevelopmentof…,..….is/areplayinganincreasinglyimportantpartin…today
4.Therehasalwaysbeen/usedtobeaheateddiscussionoverwhetherAismoreimportantthanB.
5.ThosewhoareinfavorofAhavetheirownreasons,whileothersargue/contendthat---.Somepeopletendtofavor---,but/while/meanwhile/onthecontraryothers-----.E.g.Somepeopleprefertravelingalone,butothersliketravelingwithfriends.
6.AlthoughA----,IlikedoingB---
Despitethefactthatamajorityofpeopletendto/preferto--,I’minfavorof---Iagreewiththeformeronesomehow.
Inmypointofview,Ilikeoutdoorexercisesmuchmorethanindooractivities.
E.g.AlthoughmanypeopletendtofavorTVprogram,Ilikegoingtomovies.
E.g.Despitethefactthatamajorityofpeopleprefertotraveltogetherwithfriends,I’minfavoroftravelingalone.
7.Butinmyopinion,bothAandBareessential.
Personally,IprefertostrikeabalancebetweenAandB.Asforme,I’minfavorofacombinationofAandB.IprefertocombineAandB.
AandBareofthesame/equalimportance.
WhileIattachmuchimportancetoA,Iwon’tgiveupanychancetodo----
E.g.WhileIattachmuchimportancetoindooractivites,Iwon’tgiveupanychancetotakepartinoutdooractivities.
（五）模板
1.Itisgenerallyacceptedthat-------areanindispensablepartofourdailylife,butwhenitcomesto-------,therehassprungupaheateddiscussionasto-----.Asforme,Ipreferto--------
2.Peopleallknowthat-------isveryimportant,however,differentpeoplehavedifferentopinionstowards------.Somepeoplesaywe’dbetter--------,onthecontrary,othersbelievethatwewould----------.ButasfarasIamconcerned,Ipreferabalancebetweenthetwo.
3.Itisoftendifficultfor--------todecidewhetherAorB.However,immyopinion,Aisalwaysbetter.
4.ThosewhopreferAhavetheirownreasons,whilesomeotherpeoplepreferB.Asforme,bothAansBhavemeritsanddemerits.
5.Whichismoreimportantinlife,-------,or-------?Theanswermayvaryfrompersontoperson.Butinmyopinion,theyofthesameimportance.
6.-----isveryimportantbothinthepastandpresent.Withthedevelopmentof----,----.
(Communicationisveryimportantbothinthepastandatpresent.Withthedevelopmentoftransportation,letterscanbesentmuchmorequicklythaneverbefore,butwhenthetelephoneappeared,mostpeoplehaveturnedtoit.)
7.-----aregettingtheirwayintopeople’slives.ThosewhoarefavorofAarguethat----whileotherpeoplethink-------.
8.Nowdays,theinfluenceof-----provestobeprofound.Andtherehasbeenaverycontroversialdebateasto-------.
对比型作文结尾段落
模式一结尾段=呼应主题句+强调被肯定事物的积极作用等
1.Iprefertravelingindividually,becauseformetohaveaholidaytouristoenjoyandrelaxmysylf,andtorelaxthoroughly,freedomisofessence.Ifyoulosethefreedomofaction,itisnolongeraholidayinanythingbutname.
2.Fromtheabovecomparisonandcontrast,wecancometotheconclusionthatthecityisstillabetterchoiceforchildren’seducation,thoughsomedisadvantagesdoexist.Onlyincitiescanchildrenbewellpreparedfortheirfuturelifeandkeepupwiththetrendoftheworld.
3.Iregardroomingtogetherasapreciousopportunityforitisthebestwayoflearningcooperationandunderstanding.AndIconfidentlybelievethatsuchexperiencewillbehelpfulinone’slaterlife.
4.Therefore,Istronglyadvocatecommunicatingbyletter.Anditwillprovetobeoneofthewaystobeindependentfromtelephonewhenyoupickupyourpentowritealetter.
5.Inaword,determinationisthekeytosuccess.Withastrongdeterminationonecannotonlybringhisopportunitiesintofullplay,butconquerwhateverhardshipsordangershemayface.
6.Inaword,thebestchoiceisagoodmajoratagooduniversity,butwithoutgreateffortswecanhardlygetsuchachoice.Ifwecannotobtainboth,inmyopinion,thefirstthingtoconsiderisagoodmajor.
常用句型
1)Takingintoaccountallofthesefactors/GiventhefactorsIhavejustoutlined/Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove/Nowaftercloseexamination/Forthereasonsgivenabove,itisnotdifficulttodrawtheconclusion/wemayreasonablyarriveattheconclusion/Iprefer/Istronglyrecommendthat___.
2)Inmyopinion,weshouldplacemuchemphasisontheimportanceof___.3)Inshort,Isupportthestatementthatitisbetterto____because____.
模式二结尾段=让步句+呼应主题句
1.Indooractivitiesaresomewhatchallengingaswell,forexample,chessandbookreadingcanalsodevelopourmind.HoweverIstillpreferoutdooractivities,fortheyteachmehowtobeastrongman,bothinhealthandinspirit.
2.Ofcourse,travelingalonehasitsownmerits:youcanchangeyourdestinationatanytimeandstayinoneplaceaslongasyoulike.ButIstillliketotravelwithfriends,becauseIthinkthatthemostimportantthingduringtravelistogetpleasureansrelaxation,andwithfriends,Icangetallthesethingseasily.常用句型
1)Inspiteofthesaidadvantagesof____,Iwillchoose____
2)Ofcourse,____hasitsmerits.ButI’mstillinfavoroftravelingalone___.
3)Both____and____havetheirownadvantages.Forexample,____,while____.Comparingthosetwo,however,Ipreferto____.
中立型结尾段=呼应主题句+一句话总结（总结所比较对象最突出的优点，可用while,whereas连接）
1.Ipreferabalanceoftheseactivities.Inmyopinion,physicalrecreationisnecessaryforgoodhealthbutintellectualpursuitsprovidemorepleasure.
2.Bothbookknowledgeandpersonalexperienceareessential.Whileexperiencemakesonemoreresourceful,bookknowledgemakesonemorelearned.
Therefore,weneedboth___and___.Theformer___,andthelatter___
3.Inmyopinion,bothsidesarepartlyright.Whenwe…weshouldtakeintoconsiderationallaspectsoftheproblemsandthenmaketherightdecision.
4.Personally,Ithinknothingwillbesorewardingthancombiningselectivereadingandextensivereading.Asfarasbadbooksareconcerned,weshouldneverreadthem,butasforgoodbooks,weshouldreadasextensivelyaswecan..
5.Inmyopinion,weshouldbothreadselectivelyandextensivelyaswell.Withbadbooks,weshouldneverreadthem,butforgoodbooks,weshouldreadasextensivelyaswecan..
6.Despitethefactthatthemajorityofpeoplepreferadvertisements,I’minfavorofagoodcombinationofadsandqualityofproducts.Onlyinsuchawaycouldwepromotethesalessuccessfully.
7.Inaword,wemustlearntobebothcooperativeandcompetitiveinordertosucceedinlife.Whatweneedtolearniswhentobecooperatioveandwhentobecompetitive.Thesecretof___liesinthecombinationofboth___and___.
扩展阅读：比较型作文
201*英语四级写作训练(二):比较型作文之1
来源：日期：201*-10-06阅读
21次作者:NB
比较型作文之8分作文
比较型作文一般分为说明式比较和议论式比较两种。说明式比较在比较过程中，作者不发表个人意见，在文中不体现个人取向，单纯以说明介绍为目的。
在四、六级考试中的比较型作文多以议论式比较的形式出现。议论式比较以比较事物优劣、阐明自己立场为目的，一般分为倾向型和中立型两种类型。
一、倾向型比较论说文
1.、首段=引言+主题句
引言句（第一句）：引出比较的对象
主题句（第二句）：提出主题，明确表明作者的个人取向与偏好。2、主体部分
对比点的笔墨分配：应有所侧重，对于作者持否定态度的事物的优势要少写，而肯定的事物的优点则要多用笔墨，对于其缺点则可轻描淡写、一笔带过。3、结尾段=呼应主题句+强调被肯定事物的积极作用等第一句：呼应主题句
第二句：可以用一句话归纳被肯定事物的优点等。
结尾段=让步句+呼应主题句
第一句：以让步的口吻，提出被否定事物的一个小优点第二句：笔锋一转，用一句话归纳并突出被肯定事物的重大优点，进一步确定自己的选择，与主题句相互照应。
二、中立型比较论说文
首段和主体部分与倾向型比较论说文相同，而结尾段一般采用简化总结模式：结尾段=呼应主题句+一句话总结第一句：呼应主题句
第二句：总结所比较对象最突出的优点，可用while，whereas连接万能模板：
倾向型
1.有人认为大学住宿应该独处一室2.有人认为应该与同学合住3.我的观点
Itisoftendifficultfor______todecidewhetherAorB.Inmyopinion,Aisalwaysbetter.
Somestudentsdon"tlikeB.First,theythink______because______.Second,_______.Third,_________.TheincomparableadvantageofAisthat
___________.First,___________.Second,________.Third,________.IregardAasapreciousopportunityforitisthebestwayof___________.AndIconfidentlybelievethat_______.中立型1.有人喜欢乡村生活2.有人喜欢都市生活3.我的观点
ThosewhopreferAhavetheirownreasons,whilesomeotherpeoplepreferB.Asforme,bothAandBhavemeritsanddemerits.
Firstandforemost,__________.Moreover,____________.Lastbutnotleast,_______.
Onthecontrary_________.Inaddition,___________.What’sthecommonest,________
Either___________ora_______gives_________.Ibelieve__________
引出不同观点:
1、People’sviewson…varyfrompersontoperson.Someholdthat….However,othersbelievethat….人们对…的观点因人而异.有些人认为…..然而其他人却认为．．．
2、Peoplemayhavedifferentopinionson…人们对…可能会有不同的见解.
3、Attitudestowards(drugs)varyfrompersontoperson.人们对待吸毒的态度因人而异.
4、Therearedifferentopinionsamongpeopleasto…关于….人们的观点大不相同.
5、Differentpeopleholddifferentattitudestoward(failure).对(失败)人们的态度各不相同.结尾：
1、Takingallthesefactorsintoconsideration,wenaturallycometotheconclusionthat…
把所有这些因素加以考虑,我们自然会得出结论…
2、Takingintoaccountallthesefactors,wemayreasonablycometotheconclusionthat…
考虑所有这些因素,我们可能会得出合理的结论…
3、Hence/Therefore,we’dbettercometotheconclusionthat…因此,我们最好得出这样的结论…
4、Thereisnodoubtthat(job-hopping)hasitsdrawbacksaswellasmerits.毫无疑问,跳槽有优点也有缺点.
5、Allinall,wecannotlivewithout…Butatthesametimewemusttrytofindoutnewwaystocopewiththeproblemsthatwouldarise.
总之,我们没有…是无法生活的.但同时,我们必须寻求新的解决办法来对付可能出现的新问题.
比较型连接词：like,similarly,likewise,inthesameway,inthesamemanner,equally.
比较型常用句型：
1．Theadvantagefaroutweighthedisadvantages.2．TheadvantagesofAaremuchgreaterthanthoseofB.
3．AmaybepreferabletoB,butAsuffersfromthedisadvantagesthat...4．Itisreasonabletomaintainthat...butitwouldbefoolishtoclaimthat...5．Forallthedisadvantages,ithasitscompensatingadvantages.6．Likeanythingelse,ithasitsfaults.7．AandBhasseveralpointsincommon.8．AbearssomeresemblancestoB.
9．However,thesameisnotapplicabletoB.10.AandBdifferinseveralways.
11.Evidently,ithasbothnegativeandpositiveeffects.12.Peopleusedtothink...,butthingsaredifferentnow.13.ThesameistrueofB.
14.WonderingasAis,ithasitsdrawbacks.
15.ItistruethatA...,butthechieffaults(obviousdefects)are...
四六级考试加分句型：
1.It作先行主语和先行宾语的一些句型。Shehadsaidwhatitwasnecessarytosay.
2.强调句型。Itisnotwhorulesusthatisimportant,buthowherulesus.
3."All+抽象名词"或"抽象名词+itself"(very+形容词)。Hewasallgentlenesstoher.
4.利用词汇重复表示强调。Acrimeisacrimeacrime.5."something(much)of"和"nothing(little)of"
"somethingof"相当于"tosomeextent"，表示程度。在疑问句或条件从句中，则为"anythingof"，可译为"有点"，"略微等。""译为毫无"，"全无"。"muchof"译为"大有"，"notmuchof"可译为"算不上"，"称不上"，"littleof"可译为"几乎无"。somethinglike译为"有点像，略似。"
Theysaythathehadnouniversityeducation,butheseemstobesomethingofascholar.
训练:提纲：
1.有人认为类似于因特网的高科技产品会代替书籍2.有人认为传统的信息产品书籍不会被取代3.我的看法。
这也是模板哦！
Nowadays,theinfluenceof____________provestobeprofound.Andtherehasbeenaverycontroversialdebateasto___________.(引出话题和争论，但保留作者个人看法)
Peopleinfavorof_________alwaysprovidethefollowing
evidence.Firstly,__________.Secondly,__________.Finally,____________.（偏爱书籍的理由）
Conversely,asforthemeritsof___________,inthefirstplace,________.Secondly,____________.Atthesametime,__________.(英特网等现代科技的优点)
Inshort,Iagreethat_________.（明确提出观点）大家可以选一段练习
具体要求：
首段：引出关于因特网对现代社会的影响+关于因特网和书籍话题存在的争论
主体段落一：有人偏爱阅读传统信息媒体，如书籍原因1：人类文明的历史就是书写的历史原因2：人们可以随处用自己喜欢的姿势阅读原因3：书写形式更有利于安全保存信息主体段落二：如因特网之类的现代技术手段的优点
优点1：新科技的出现历来都回给人类生活带来许多好处优点2：电脑新科技的出现，使信息储备量大大提高优点3：电脑新科技的出现，使信息处理的效率提高了结尾段:：因特网最终会代替书籍等信息手段
参考答案：
Nowadays,theinfluenceofInternetprovestobeprofound.AndtherehasbeenaverycontroversialdebateastowhetherornotInternetwillreplacethebookasthemainsourceofinformation.
Peopleinfavorofthetraditionalinformationsourcesalwaysprovidethefollowingevidence.Firstly,thehistoryofhumancivilizationisthewrittenhistory.Secondly,peoplearefreetochooseanypostureandplacethatmakesthemcomfortablewhenreading.Finally,traditionalinformationsoureceslikebooksarerelativelystableandreliabletopreservethehumaninformationwell.
Conversely,asforthemeritsofmoderntechnologies,inthefirstplace,inhistory,wecanseethateverynewtechnologybringsaboutgreatchangestoourlife.Secondly,moderntechnologylikecomputersisanothergreatinventionthatcanstoreahugeamountofdata.Atthesametime,Weareabletoprocessthedatamorerapidlyandaccuratelythanwecaneverimagine.
Inshort,Iagreethatmoderntechnology,suchastheInternet,willcomedayreplacethewrittenwordasthemainsourceofinformation.Therefore,Iameagerlylookingforwardtothatday.
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